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| • | Only use headlines that push hot buttons. |
| • | Use emotion in your headline so it impacts and impinges. Capture attention with emotion. Once you have their attention, present a logical solution. |
| • | Generalities fail to impinge and are rarely believed. Rather, use specifics like, “7 ways to avoid” or “The 90 second solution to... |
| • | Stay away from puns or trying to be cute. Double meanings create confusion, are seldom hot buttons, don’t capture attention and fail to promise solutions to perceived problems. |
| • | A headline should be clear in its interpretation and be able to stand alone as a meaningful statement. It should paint a picture within the minds of your audience, like all of the samples included within this section. |
| • | Headlines don’t have to be short, as long as each word has a purpose. Thus, if removing a word from a headline reduces its emotional impact, keep it. For example, in the heading, “ Finally, you can know exactly where all your field employees are every second of the day just by looking at your computer screen”, if you extract the words finally, exactly, or just, you’re removing emotional words, thus weakening impingement. |
| • | If you use a photo at the top of your ad or promotion, make sure your headline makes it clear what it is supposed to communicate. Photos can take viewers in endless directions. You want to ensure viewers go in the direction that will enhance the headline and increase impact. |
Here are a few effective headlines:
| • | (auto repair) How to avoid choosing a repair shop that will overcharge you and mess up your repairs |
| • | (restaurant) 4 reasons why you should try our restaurant if you love eating out |
| • | (kitchen remodeling) 10 reasons why our customers can't wait to show you their kitchens |
| • | (financial planner) Within 6 months you’ll be laughing at money worries, if you follow our 12-step program |
| • | (dentist) 6 reasons why people dread going to the dentist and how we overcame them all |
| • | (coffee cafe) What the Local Starbucks Doesn't Want You to know |
These headlines capture attention and make it easy to create copy that will involve the readers, interest them and get them to take action.
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